VY1

This is really good, you chose the stage and effects well. However, the lighting and camera is a bit off to the pose and the idea. They make the picture look indistinctive.
I think you should adjust lingting to a lighter or darker value. This current lighting setting is kind of neutral, and a bit... bland. Same for the camera view; I'm not sure what to suggest, perhaps rotate all axis a bit more, and increase perspective value.